(I didnt see your sequence because I was the only one there)
Well there are some things that you need to work on.:
▪After the transition, I called inbound for touch and go RNW 07R. You didnt give me a pattern entry. You only cleared me. Remember: Always give pattern entry to all and every single aircraft.(And ofcourse sequence, if it applies)
▪After my first t&g I requested runway change to 07C. You gave me proper pattern entry and a clear, but when I reported full stop, you cleared me again. If you have already cleared me for the option there is no need ro clear me again,becuse the :“clear for the option” command includes:t&g, stop & go, low pass or even a full stop.Its not totally incorrect, but there is no need to clear me again
▪Too late exit command
All in all, keep up the great work,appreciate all the feedback you get and you will sharpen your skills in no time.